My Favourite Ice Cream

My favourite ice-cream is blueberry. It is sweet and delicious.
                                                  by Nixcent

Describe A Picture

Learning goal: I am learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria:  I can do this when I 

• add describing words
• add powerful verbs

The sea was rough. The waves crashed into the boat. The boat bobbed high and dipped low. The water sloshed into the boat. The people were afraid that they might drown.

                                                   by Nixcent

Describe A Picture

Learning goal: I am learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria:  I can do this when I 

• add describing words
• add powerful verbs

The sea was rough. The waves crashed into the boat. The boat bobbed high and dipped low. The water sloshed into the boat. The people were afraid that they might drown.

                                                   by Nixcent

A Day At The Beach

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. I flipped on the sand. I made sand castles. It was a very hot day so I went for a swim. I was hungry and I ate pizza and hamburger.
I had a good time.
                                                   By Nixcent

Trip To Mac Donald

In the weekend my family and I went to Mac Donald. We bought hamburgers and fries and happy meals. The fries were crispy and the hamburgers were crunchy.
                                                    by Nixcent

The King Pig

I am learning to write a narrative text.
Success criteria: I can do this when

•  I describe the main characters
• describe the the problem
• describe the solution

The King Pig was angry because the sheep were not listening to him. He was mean to the sheep. He made them work hard. He threw eggs at them. He shouted at them but the sheep ignored him. 

The King Pig was sad because no one liked him. One of the sheep whispered to him you have to be kind. So the King Pig started to show kindness and care. Everyone was happy.

                                                By Nicxcent

Trip To Samoa

Learning goal: I am learning to write a recount. 
Success criteria:  I can do this when I

• write my events in order
• use linking words

In the holidays my family and I went to Samoa. We went on a big plane. 

It was very hot there so I went to the beach for a swim. I drank green coconut and it was sweet. I ate lots of Samoan food. They were delicious.

I enjoyed my holidays.

                                                    By Nixcent

The King Lion

I  am learning to write about the part of the story that  like the best.

The part of the story that I liked the best was when the king lion slept because he thought it was night.
                                                   by Nixtcent

Our Autumn Tree

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.

Autumn leaves are falling softly down to the ground. the leaves are orange, red, yellow, gold and brown. They make a crunching and crackling sound when I walked on them.
                                                   By Nixcent